How do you wanna set the meet up with then Kris? Since we have faily being saved by gormom and selene follow them till you guys meet and go to sleep that first night. When Wizen attacks selene for coming to their camp
Alright so i got a gryphon attacking Faily so stephne its your part here how would you save her etc or run away with her. How wold you like their love at first sight.
Well, as we've already hinted toward, Gormon and Faily will meet when Gormon saves her. Selene will be following them, and eventually they will catch on i'd suppose.
As for Wizen, i'm not too sure. It would be nice to kind of incorporate the ending to Wizen's intro of being splashed with water, but who would it be? I'm thinking something like Selene recruits him to help seperate Gormon and Faily somehow
Well I was thinking of having Faily come in the picture after the scene with you 3 but it may not be a good idea seeing its pretty far into the story Other than that probably just a message from the Gods telling me to move on What do you guys think?
The splash of water of faily woke up wizen as she got snatched away to a further spot where she meets grmon and he saves her. Selene heard their thoughts and followed them there. Perfect!
Waking up he rubs his eyes being tickled by large pure white feathers. Hearing a female voice crying for help he can see the girl carried by a large Gryphon into the horizon. He looks to his right and finds a tree with a strong branch he cuts it off with a sharp jagged rock, makes a spear and runs in the direction of the damsel in distress.
Weaving through the thick dark trees he sees a large gap with crystallized rocks at the bottom. He throws his spear across the way and runs back a few feet for a running start hurls himself over the gap barely making the jump. Across the way are a pair of eyes in the shadows of the bushes. Slowly taking a step out of the shadows is a pitch black panther with razor sharp teeth, long whiskers and two sharp horns on its head. Growling and snarling at the man the panther is drooling of hunger with blood shot eyes. The man holds his spear pointing it at the overgrown cat and starts to circle him with eye contact. Swiping his claws at him the man angrily asked “I have no time for you beast! Wait.. where you the one that gave me these cuts!?” The panther leaped at him pinning him down to the ground drooling all over, clawing away. He yelled in pain, the panther knocked his spear a few feet so he took the closest rock and bashed him on the head. He rolled over to his spear grabbed it and quickly stood on his feet. The panther shook his head in dizziness and started charging at the man. As the panther was in clawing range the man thrust his spear and connected with the cat. “That’ll teach you to mess with me.” he said with a grin on his face. He took one of the panther’s claw and make a necklace out of it and wore it with pride dashing off to find the girl.
Leaving the jungle he comes across an open field where he sees the gryphon being fought far into the distance, by an elf with the girl by the side. Hurt badly from the panther he slowly makes his way over.
She looks down sadly noticing the voices is gone and so are the beautiful creatures. She walks to the pond and looks into it and sees her reflection as she touches her face. She reaches her hands down in the water and scooped a little in her hand as she sips away. She starts to hear more whispers of multiple people in her head as she stands up and walk towards them.
Wizen
He starts to have a dream where he is running through the trees wild and free but all he can hear is a voice calling him. The next morning he wakes from water being splashed on his face.
Faily
As she was scared she started screaming and the Gryphoon started shaking and slowly down to the ground. It threw her to the ground and flapped its wings at her as it walked towards her.
Gormon
Amazed by the fish’s beauty and wondered what else this strange land had to offer. At that moment he heard the most terrifying of screams. It sounded as if there was someone in danger, a girl. He looked around, saw nothing, and ran in the direction of the voice.
I want faily to be chased by a creature as gormon saves her life and they fall in love at first sight.
ReplyDeleteThe thoughts in their head is what leads selene to find them but she stays far behind and watches them as she wants what faily has gromons attention
How do you wanna set the meet up with then Kris? Since we have faily being saved by gormom and selene follow them till you guys meet and go to sleep that first night. When Wizen attacks selene for coming to their camp
ReplyDeleteAlright so i got a gryphon attacking Faily so stephne its your part here how would you save her etc or run away with her. How wold you like their love at first sight.
ReplyDeleteWell, as we've already hinted toward, Gormon and Faily will meet when Gormon saves her. Selene will be following them, and eventually they will catch on i'd suppose.
ReplyDeleteAs for Wizen, i'm not too sure. It would be nice to kind of incorporate the ending to Wizen's intro of being splashed with water, but who would it be? I'm thinking something like Selene recruits him to help seperate Gormon and Faily somehow
naw i like the idea of her being in the dark because shes a dark creature. Shes suppose to lurk alone. Sirens are loners.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure then, did you have something planned for who was waking Wizen up with the water Kris?
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure then. Did you have something planned for who is waking up Wizen with the water, Kris?
ReplyDeleteAck, first one didn't post, i thought it broke. then it posted when i reposted lol.
ReplyDeleteWell I was thinking of having Faily come in the picture after the scene with you 3 but it may not be a good idea seeing its pretty far into the story Other than that probably just a message from the Gods telling me to move on What do you guys think?
ReplyDeletebut im not sure when that part will take place
ReplyDeleteOk lets do this.
ReplyDeleteThe splash of water of faily woke up wizen as she got snatched away to a further spot where she meets grmon and he saves her. Selene heard their thoughts and followed them there. Perfect!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a plan! Ill have Wizen eventually track you guys down.
ReplyDeleteWaking up he rubs his eyes being tickled by large pure white feathers. Hearing a female voice crying for help he can see the girl carried by a large Gryphon into the horizon. He looks to his right and finds a tree with a strong branch he cuts it off with a sharp jagged rock, makes a spear and runs in the direction of the damsel in distress.
ReplyDeleteWeaving through the thick dark trees he sees a large gap with crystallized rocks at the bottom. He throws his spear across the way and runs back a few feet for a running start hurls himself over the gap barely making the jump. Across the way are a pair of eyes in the shadows of the bushes. Slowly taking a step out of the shadows is a pitch black panther with razor sharp teeth, long whiskers and two sharp horns on its head. Growling and snarling at the man the panther is drooling of hunger with blood shot eyes. The man holds his spear pointing it at the overgrown cat and starts to circle him with eye contact. Swiping his claws at him the man angrily asked “I have no time for you beast! Wait.. where you the one that gave me these cuts!?” The panther leaped at him pinning him down to the ground drooling all over, clawing away. He yelled in pain, the panther knocked his spear a few feet so he took the closest rock and bashed him on the head. He rolled over to his spear grabbed it and quickly stood on his feet. The panther shook his head in dizziness and started charging at the man. As the panther was in clawing range the man thrust his spear and connected with the cat. “That’ll teach you to mess with me.” he said with a grin on his face. He took one of the panther’s claw and make a necklace out of it and wore it with pride dashing off to find the girl.
Leaving the jungle he comes across an open field where he sees the gryphon being fought far into the distance, by an elf with the girl by the side. Hurt badly from the panther he slowly makes his way over.
Selene
ReplyDeleteShe looks down sadly noticing the voices is gone and so are the beautiful creatures. She walks to the pond and looks into it and sees her reflection as she touches her face. She reaches her hands down in the water and scooped a little in her hand as she sips away. She starts to hear more whispers of multiple people in her head as she stands up and walk towards them.
Wizen
He starts to have a dream where he is running through the trees wild and free but all he can hear is a voice calling him. The next morning he wakes from water being splashed on his face.
Faily
As she was scared she started screaming and the Gryphoon started shaking and slowly down to the ground. It threw her to the ground and flapped its wings at her as it walked towards her.
Gormon
Amazed by the fish’s beauty and wondered what else this strange land had to offer. At that moment he heard the most terrifying of screams. It sounded as if there was someone in danger, a girl. He looked around, saw nothing, and ran in the direction of the voice.