Waking up to the splash of water gently touching her face as the sun rises upon her body playing there wet and hungry. She sits up and looks around wondering where she was and how she got there. She stood up and started loosing balance from hunger as she sits back down. Starring at the sun asking questions to herself as to why shes here and who she is.
She lay back down as she hear whispers but no one to be found near by. She stops and focuses on it and she heard nothing. She slowly crawled tot he water to wash her face hoping it would help her wake up thinking its all a dream. But surely enough it wasnt.
She finally was able to stand up as she turn around her eyes widen. The forest the mountains everythig was beautiful... She was mezmerized as she walks towards the forest searching for anything type of food to eat. She comes upon a small bush with red odd shaped fruits hanging from it. she reached for one and took it off the bush as she sat there and examines it before eating. It started moving and legs grew out of it. She opened her eyes wider and looked at the creature it turned around and looked back at her frightened as it crawled back into its red shell. She laighed as she put it down.
She continues to walk further into the woods and reaches a beautiful meadow with just a little ray of sunlight shining up the little pond there as White Unicorns arrive to drink the water as if she wasnt even there. She walks closer to the pond as she hers whispers again she stopped and stood there. The Unicorns looked at and suddenly got frigthened and flew away she reached at them and said
Wait!
She looks down sadly noticing the voice is gone and so are the beautiful creatures. She walks to the pond and looks into it and sees her reflection as she touches her face. She reaches her hands down in the water and scooped a little in her hand as she sips away. She starts to hear more whispers as she stands up and walk towards them.
The white sea around him made it seem as if he was floating on a cloud. He could feel the cold moist powder covering him from head to toe. As he stood, he brushed the tiny crystals of snow from his broad shoulders and long thighs. He was, an elf of incomparable beauty, took in a deep breath of air as he gazed outward as to get a sense of direction. The clouds floating all around him made it impossible to see anything, but he knew he had to be at an altitude of the gods. Each breath made it more difficult for the next, so he started his journey down what he thought had to be the largest mountain in all the land.
“How did I get up here?” He thought. He was unable to remember anything, even his own name. It was as if he was born an adult at the top of a mountain. As he descended the mountain, he began to notice how beautiful the scenery was. The luscious greenery was pleasant on his eyes, like nothing he had even seen before. Finally, the clouds were thinning. The air around him was so clear he could see all the way to the ocean, which seemed to surround the mountain all around. In the near distance, He could see a stream flowing down the mountain. The sight alone reminded him of his thirst. As he approached it, he noticed that he could see straight to the bottom, which couldn’t have been more than arm deep. He bent over the water and cupped a handful to his mouth. It was so clean and refreshing, that one little sip charged him with energy and satisfaction. As he cupped some more water into his hands, he could feel something wiggling around, but he couldn’t see anything. As soon as he brought his hands out of the water, the most beautiful of fish appeared in his hands. Startled, he dropped it back into the water and it disappeared.
He was amazed by the fish’s beauty and wondered what else this strange land had to offer. At that moment he heard the most terrifying of screams. It sounded as if there was someone in danger, a girl. He looked around, saw nothing, and ran in the direction of the voice.
It was the morning after a full moon and in the dark jungle of Azmalock are torn apart clothes are scatters amongst the grounds. There lies a man who appears to be nearly dead, but is only weak from that terrible night. “How did I get here? Where are my clothes? My face stings.. How did I get these cuts?” he asks himself in a tired voice. He looks around to get his bearings and begins to look for food to fill his empty stomach. Hot, starving, and alone he is so weak he has no desire to run so he walks stumbling along the grounds hoping he doesn‘t come across a large beast that is hungrier than he is.
On his search for food he comes across some shredded cloth “What luck! I don’t know how my clothes got here, but I wont be too cold anymore. It looks like some claws got to it.. So torn up .“ he puts it on around his waste, he smiles thinking to himself “At least I have a little dignity back.” Unaware of the clothes he put on the cloth had unusual markings with many secrets to its meaning.
Pressing on with much confusion he comes across a lake of crystal clear water. He splashes the water on his dry pale face and takes a drink then washes his hair. Looking in the water he sees his reflection he can see the cuts on his face are slowly getting better. The mist from the waterfall leading down to the lake lifts his spirits and he dives in. After his bath he goes fishing for a meal. Night falls and he sets up camp by the lake and lays down looking up at the stars asking questions to himself “What happened to me? I can’t seem to remember a thing.“ he later dozes off.
He starts to have a dream where he is running through the trees wild and free but all he can hear is a voice calling him. The next morning he wakes from water being splashed on his face.
She sat up and wiped her eye sas a little child awakwening. He feels a little chill as she shivers and holds herself. She then lays her hands down as she atempts to stand up she opened her eyes wide as she feels below her. its soft and solid green.
She thought to herself
Where am I?
As she look around everything seems so big and then crawls to the edge and find that she was sleeping on a leaf of a giant tree. There were small branches connecting to the big tree as she looks down to find her way she slips and falls straight down and slapsh into a leaf sized as a cup full of morning mist from the magical world. She feels a little pain on her back as she tries to reach it but there was nothign then the pain was gone. The sun rised in as she saw gliter surrounding her for the first 10 seconds as she stood still watching it fade away. As she slowly reached for the sparkling light something flew by and snacthed her as she looked up it was a Gyphoon. A very hungry mean Gryphoon. As she was scared she started screaming and the Gryphoon started shaking and slowly down to the ground. It threw her to the ground and flapped its wings at her as it walked towards her.
Selenes version
ReplyDeleteWaking up to the splash of water gently touching her face as the sun rises upon her body playing there wet and hungry. She sits up and looks around wondering where she was and how she got there. She stood up and started loosing balance from hunger as she sits back down. Starring at the sun asking questions to herself as to why shes here and who she is.
She lay back down as she hear whispers but no one to be found near by. She stops and focuses on it and she heard nothing. She slowly crawled tot he water to wash her face hoping it would help her wake up thinking its all a dream. But surely enough it wasnt.
She finally was able to stand up as she turn around her eyes widen. The forest the mountains everythig was beautiful... She was mezmerized as she walks towards the forest searching for anything type of food to eat. She comes upon a small bush with red odd shaped fruits hanging from it. she reached for one and took it off the bush as she sat there and examines it before eating. It started moving and legs grew out of it. She opened her eyes wider and looked at the creature it turned around and looked back at her frightened as it crawled back into its red shell. She laighed as she put it down.
She continues to walk further into the woods and reaches a beautiful meadow with just a little ray of sunlight shining up the little pond there as White Unicorns arrive to drink the water as if she wasnt even there. She walks closer to the pond as she hers whispers again she stopped and stood there. The Unicorns looked at and suddenly got frigthened and flew away she reached at them and said
Wait!
She looks down sadly noticing the voice is gone and so are the beautiful creatures. She walks to the pond and looks into it and sees her reflection as she touches her face. She reaches her hands down in the water and scooped a little in her hand as she sips away. She starts to hear more whispers as she stands up and walk towards them.
I want charcters to interact with little creatures too guys. So people do know its a magical Island.
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ReplyDeleteGormon’s Version
ReplyDeleteThe white sea around him made it seem as if he was floating on a cloud. He could feel the cold moist powder covering him from head to toe. As he stood, he brushed the tiny crystals of snow from his broad shoulders and long thighs. He was, an elf of incomparable beauty, took in a deep breath of air as he gazed outward as to get a sense of direction. The clouds floating all around him made it impossible to see anything, but he knew he had to be at an altitude of the gods. Each breath made it more difficult for the next, so he started his journey down what he thought had to be the largest mountain in all the land.
“How did I get up here?” He thought. He was unable to remember anything, even his own name. It was as if he was born an adult at the top of a mountain. As he descended the mountain, he began to notice how beautiful the scenery was. The luscious greenery was pleasant on his eyes, like nothing he had even seen before. Finally, the clouds were thinning. The air around him was so clear he could see all the way to the ocean, which seemed to surround the mountain all around.
In the near distance, He could see a stream flowing down the mountain. The sight alone reminded him of his thirst. As he approached it, he noticed that he could see straight to the bottom, which couldn’t have been more than arm deep. He bent over the water and cupped a handful to his mouth. It was so clean and refreshing, that one little sip charged him with energy and satisfaction. As he cupped some more water into his hands, he could feel something wiggling around, but he couldn’t see anything. As soon as he brought his hands out of the water, the most beautiful of fish appeared in his hands. Startled, he dropped it back into the water and it disappeared.
He was amazed by the fish’s beauty and wondered what else this strange land had to offer. At that moment he heard the most terrifying of screams. It sounded as if there was someone in danger, a girl. He looked around, saw nothing, and ran in the direction of the voice.
Wow thats so good Stephen!
ReplyDeleteI want them to all drink the water on the island because thats what help their abilities kick in somewhat
ReplyDeleteIt was the morning after a full moon and in the dark jungle of Azmalock are torn apart clothes are scatters amongst the grounds. There lies a man who appears to be nearly dead, but is only weak from that terrible night. “How did I get here? Where are my clothes? My face stings.. How did I get these cuts?” he asks himself in a tired voice. He looks around to get his bearings and begins to look for food to fill his empty stomach. Hot, starving, and alone he is so weak he has no desire to run so he walks stumbling along the grounds hoping he doesn‘t come across a large beast that is hungrier than he is.
ReplyDeleteOn his search for food he comes across some shredded cloth “What luck! I don’t know how my clothes got here, but I wont be too cold anymore. It looks like some claws got to it.. So torn up .“ he puts it on around his waste, he smiles thinking to himself “At least I have a little dignity back.” Unaware of the clothes he put on the cloth had unusual markings with many secrets to its meaning.
Pressing on with much confusion he comes across a lake of crystal clear water. He splashes the water on his dry pale face and takes a drink then washes his hair. Looking in the water he sees his reflection he can see the cuts on his face are slowly getting better. The mist from the waterfall leading down to the lake lifts his spirits and he dives in. After his bath he goes fishing for a meal. Night falls and he sets up camp by the lake and lays down looking up at the stars asking questions to himself “What happened to me? I can’t seem to remember a thing.“ he later dozes off.
He starts to have a dream where he is running through the trees wild and free but all he can hear is a voice calling him. The next morning he wakes from water being splashed on his face.
She sat up and wiped her eye sas a little child awakwening. He feels a little chill as she shivers and holds herself. She then lays her hands down as she atempts to stand up she opened her eyes wide as she feels below her. its soft and solid green.
ReplyDeleteShe thought to herself
Where am I?
As she look around everything seems so big and then crawls to the edge and find that she was sleeping on a leaf of a giant tree. There were small branches connecting to the big tree as she looks down to find her way she slips and falls straight down and slapsh into a leaf sized as a cup full of morning mist from the magical world. She feels a little pain on her back as she tries to reach it but there was nothign then the pain was gone. The sun rised in as she saw gliter surrounding her for the first 10 seconds as she stood still watching it fade away. As she slowly reached for the sparkling light something flew by and snacthed her as she looked up it was a Gyphoon. A very hungry mean Gryphoon. As she was scared she started screaming and the Gryphoon started shaking and slowly down to the ground. It threw her to the ground and flapped its wings at her as it walked towards her.
Thats perfect! Now connecting them. After we get the meeting together. Check the next link above.
ReplyDeleteNice intros guys!
ReplyDeleteThanks! You guys are awesome writers! I love it! This would be the best work yet!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDeleteYep, looking good so far. Now comes the really fun part of making them all start their interactions with each other, could get interesting lol